I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Thursday, 28 May 2020
Fixing sentences
This week for writing this week I have been focusing on grammar, writing with lots of sounds, passive voice and Using an adverbs.here is what i have done for my work.
Hi Alice Great blog post I love how you have changed the words to make them more interesting I really enjoyed reading it maybe next time you could use a little bit more punctuation but very good job with detail I was a lot more interested with the new sentences. Well done
Hi Alice
ReplyDeleteGreat blog post I love how you have changed the words to make them more interesting I really enjoyed reading it maybe next time you could use a little bit more punctuation but very good job with detail I was a lot more interested with the new sentences.
Well done