Writing T3W3

This week for writing we have been taking notes for our speeches coming up. The topic that I have chosen is quality education. This is the notes that I have taken. 

 

Enrollment in primary education in developing countries has reached 91 per cent but 57 million children remain out of school

More than half of children that have not enrolled in school live in sub-Saharan Africa

An estimated 50 per cent of out-of-school children of primary school age live in conflict-affected areas

103 million youth worldwide lack basic literacy skills, and more than 60 per cent of them are women 

Improve school facilities to provide a safe and positive environment for everyone.

Increase the number of trained and qualified teachers.

59  million kids with no education 

Do you like writing speeches?

writing w9

This week for writing i wave been  focusing on adverbial phrases, hyphen and rhetorical questions this is my work

do you use these features in your writing ?

writing T2W8

This week for writing i have been focusing on complex sentences, alliteration and adverb (ly) here is my work.

Do you use these in your writing?

Writing T2W7

This week for writing i have been in a group were we work on three different goals that we do every week this week your goals were adverb (ly), passive voice and sound this is my work.

Do you use these in your writing?

Fixing sentences

This week for writing this week I have been focusing on grammar, writing with lots of sounds, passive voice  and Using an adverbs.here is what i have done for my work.

 
Do you use these thing in your writing?

meerkats

In the Tumu hub we’ve been learning about speech marks and apostrophes.

One hot sunny morning the meerkats awoke from there deep sleep after a late night getting dinner. They all had a little bit of dinner but not enough to get them through the whole day so they had to go and get some breakfast. The meerkats Thought that  they would be looking for hours but then, they saw passion fruit of magic. The magic in the passion fruit was that it can make as much food as they want so they went up to get it of course the meerkats sent up the troops to get it the king of the eagles king Elgon and his troops were watching them.

“My troops go and get that fruit so that the meerkats can not get it,” said king Elgon. The meerkats king, King Julian was aware that they were coming so king Julian said “get that passion fruit” so they tried but they did not get there in time

“Chase that eagal” said king Julian.  So all of the meerkats chased and gave each other bost up to try and make a chain to get back the passion fruit, the troops kept chasing the eagles the longer the chain of meerkats the slower the eagles went so the meerkats kept sending their best most awesome troops. The eagles were slowing down suddenly they dropped with exhaustion.

Thank you for reading my story please leave some punctuation suggestions down bellow.